Cell Phone

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Cell Phone

Post by a5' » 16 Feb 2010, 22:10

Hi,

I tried to model my cell some time ago and had a great deal of trouble. I decided to have another go at it. Still not that good at modeling this type of thing.


This is the phone
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This is the model
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Here's a shot showing the edges,
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any suggestions.

Thanks,

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Re: Cell Phone

Post by Diurno » 17 Feb 2010, 12:55

wel... the segmentation it's not really good... try to keep it linear; the piece in the center don't force it to make the "circular piece", but make it as another object.

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Re: Cell Phone

Post by a5' » 18 Feb 2010, 17:26

Diurno wrote:wel... the segmentation it's not really good... try to keep it linear; the piece in the center don't force it to make the "circular piece", but make it as another object.

Thanks for the reply,

I understood that you said to keep away from having "forced" shapes out of the editing cage.

And, that I should try and do the other pieces as separate.

-- I tried to do that but then started again.

I will do the other pieces separate, I think, though


Thanks,

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new::
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wire one
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wire two
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Re: Cell Phone--

Post by a5' » 20 Feb 2010, 09:22

More Progress. I have to straiten out the curve at the bottom ( lower left) but I am having a hard time getting the sub-d's to behave. Even when I remove the sub-d's, to straiten...?
cell_feb20.jpg
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wire's
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Re: Cell Phone

Post by Hirazi Blue » 20 Feb 2010, 10:41

Thread has been moved (and I changed the title back again)! :D
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Post by a5' » 20 Feb 2010, 21:54

Thanks, I wasn't sure who's forum this was to moderate.

and thanks for changing it back.

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Re: Cell Phone

Post by a5' » 23 Feb 2010, 10:48

more progress, I think its starting to look good, but there is something missing.
cell_feb23.jpg
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c_wireI_feb23.JPG
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Thanks for looking,

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Re: Cell Phone

Post by Hirazi Blue » 23 Feb 2010, 10:51

Looks good! Keep it up! :-bd
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Re: Cell Phone

Post by a5' » 23 Feb 2010, 11:08

Hirazi Blue wrote:Looks good! Keep it up! :-bd

Thanks for the encouragement,


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Re: Cell Phone

Post by a5' » 27 Feb 2010, 16:53

I was just adjusting the lighting and the materials for a preliminary go-round. Here's some screen shots and a render region. Feedback?
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cellwireIIfeb27.JPG
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Cell feb 27.jpg
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