Avatar Pandora Alien Female

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Avatar Pandora Alien Female

Post by fresh_neel » 19 Nov 2009, 13:30

Hi, This is my female alien base mesh.

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Re: Avatar Pandora Alien Female

Post by fresh_neel » 20 Nov 2009, 06:01

This is Mudbox sculpt I finished Today.
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Re: Avatar Pandora Alien Female

Post by owei » 20 Nov 2009, 10:57

..Hi..!

A good start..but I think there are many problems concerning believability and anatomy in your model. Have you studied human anatomy so far and learned about the functional contexts of bones and muscles..? I think a deep understanding is very important for doing human like alien characters...there are many sites out there with anatomy stuff. Check it out. Here is a tutorial with some very useful tips..


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Re: Avatar Pandora Alien Female

Post by fresh_neel » 20 Nov 2009, 11:54

I just finished sculpting the body and start texturing.
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Re: Avatar Pandora Alien Female

Post by fresh_neel » 20 Nov 2009, 17:34

another update
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Re: Avatar Pandora Alien Female

Post by Grubber » 20 Nov 2009, 20:06

Shouldn't this be in WIP section? x_x

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Re: Avatar Pandora Alien Female

Post by owei » 20 Nov 2009, 23:57

...yes, it should...just moved it ;)

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Re: Avatar Pandora Alien Female

Post by shushens » 22 Nov 2009, 10:37

You are a very adroit modeller and texture painter. If only you pay a little more attention to Anatomy, this will look terrific! Here are some things that look odd to me after the first look.

The ankles are hugely swollen.
The toes have more or less same length and thickness.
The nipples are pointing away from each other like they are being drawn away from each other.
The bottom part of the leg is even thinner than the tail.
There is no properly defined armpit. The place where it should be is just taken by the torso and the shoulder.
Judging from the chin and the face, it is an aged alien. Bosoms should be more loose and flattened. The lower abdomen should also have more folds and contours.

Apart from these, the fingers need a lot of attention. I think you will have to redo the hand(s).

But it is looking pretty good! Keep up the good work, Nilesh bhai!
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